Media Project Feedback

After presenting my magazine to the class, I received some kind observations and some helpful comments in revising my product. Some things that the class thought I did well on include the eye-catching colors, the table of contents layout, and the font size. Some things that the class thought I could make some changes to include the same house style as Dylan's edition for the table of contents, include page numbers on the two page article, format the pictures to make them more symmetrical in the two page article, and move the featured article from the beginning of the magazine to the middle, and either add captions to the pictures in the two page article or make sure to describe the actions that are taking place in those photos. An additional revision that Dylan and I have discussed is replacing one of the articles in the table of contents to include an "Ethics of Science" to create more meaning and to convince schools to purchase the magazine. This would also allow student to become more informed in scientific issues and further progress their interest in the science field. In order to make these revisions for the magazine, all of the changes will take place in Publisher. Dylan and I will agree on the same house style for the table of contents and that will be fixed, the page numbers will be added to the bottom right hand corners of the two page article, the pictures in the two page article will be played around with/formatted until they are symmetrical in the article pages along with a caption or more description in the article referring to the photos, the featured article will be moved from the beginning of the magazine to the middle using Publisher, and the new "Ethics of Science" will be added in the table of contents using Publisher as well.