Magazine Revisions: Two Page Article Draft #2

Revisions to the two page article have been made. First, the spacing in the beginning of the article has been fixed to decrease the gap between the first and second sentence. Also, the pictures on the second page have been arranged to look more symmetrical and the last two contain captions, now describing Skyler's actions. Lastly, page numbers have been added to each page, following the table of contents. This way, I believe this article portrays much more realism and authenticity regarding modern science magazines today.